Critical evaluation of my First Draft of my Double Page Spread

I think my first draft of my double page spread including my exclusive interview with Florescent Violet will attract and relate to my target audience. again i have used a model that is of a similar age to the target audience so they should be instantly attracted.the image also uses colours that relate to the band and connotate relation to social media sites such as Instagram. i have followed all the conventions of a magazines double page spread so it easy and clear for them to understand, as well as keeping up a constant house design that is visible over the three pages. the image also reflects the personality of the artist and shoews a more natural side to her that the audience can then relate to rather than just a posing celeb seen on mainstream magazines. Overall my double page spread offers an intersting article that discusses the interests of the audience, and  has relating image that alltogether clearly show the real personality of Florescent Violet, which is what my audience wanted.